I enjoy both designs. You used color very well. The composition is presented very nicely here. However, the hierarchy is a little unclear. I do enjoy how you are using scale to emphasize different letters. I just think the information gets lost.
I agree with Caitlin that the colors are very well used. I really enjoy how the different forms of the letters come together. I think if you scaled back some of them you could create a clearer hierarchy.
I enjoy both designs. You used color very well. The composition is presented very nicely here. However, the hierarchy is a little unclear. I do enjoy how you are using scale to emphasize different letters. I just think the information gets lost.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Caitlin that the colors are very well used. I really enjoy how the different forms of the letters come together. I think if you scaled back some of them you could create a clearer hierarchy.
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